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The sweet grass gleams upon the moon;
the moon providing a gentle glow below.
All is quiet except Nature's sweet songs,
Her sweet crickets setting the slow and romantic mood.

Very slowly,
I walk through the grass.
The grass wiping on my bare feet,
it's feeling like a gentle mother's tickle.
The place's sweet air,
it brushes against my skin,
sinking into me.

It feels like hours, perhaps it was;
The moon stayed in its spot though,
it's gleam never dieing.
For I moment  I wonder;
Where was I?
But, As I thought the foggier it became.

Out of the clear mist,
Came his shadow of perfection.
Instantly my lips mouthed out his name.
With cautious steps I step forth,
My hands soon on his,
our bodies close and so is our face.

As I look into his eyes,
I realize what was going on.
A smile spread upon my lips,
Eyes dancing in his.
I realized we would be together,
Forever
We were in Neveah...
©2008-2009 ~Doting-Fire
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Author's Comments

I have to say, this is my best piece. So, just to explain omething. Neveah is like a fancy word to say 'Heaven'. Also, I didn't want to offend other religions. This piece isn't about a certain religion. It is about a beautiful after life.. Anyways, I got really deep into it. I'm really proud of how it turned out. =) Some inspirations were:

*The book Elsewhere by ? (gotta check)
*My current love interest. :date:
*Icons, quotes, short stories about live
*This show about Heaven

So, it was mixed with love and after life. It's beautiful. Honestly, I hope heaven is like this. :3

Comments please!

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BAM..is all I gotta say about this *faves*

<33 you Twinsy

Julz

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I am yours amd you are mine <3

Twinsy:So, I touched his pants in the dream, then I guess I beat him up.
Me:So, it was a reaction of love making
Twinsy:o_o x333333
Me:Why else would you touch his pants!?!
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Thank you Julz!
I love how you always comment my work.

:hug:

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Caution:Shallow Siggy--Wear a Life Vest

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